Monday, August 30, 2010

A Delving Poem

of all the voices of me, all the trains: inner-critic, inner-child, inner-wild-woman, inner-any-human-ness...
of all the moods, personalities that arise,
is there one that is most me,
most true to my authentic being?
or is it only in the fleeting moments when
for a breath
something outside of these
bears witness to them
there is the collective sigh
i am none of these


  1. or maybe just all of them...smiles. and if they would all stop talking at once....

    nice one shot!

  2. Really a nice one shot...

    Enjoyed the read... and the thoughts about what I am -- none of these...)


  3. Interesting, philosophical sort of poem. Thanks for sharing it.

  4. It takes many different ingredients to bake a cake. Different ingredients in different amounts mean no two cakes are exactly the same.

    Nice One Shot!

  5. Very well done and most of the time, most of us dont know ourselves too... the biggest question has always been "Who am I" through out the ages and this is a spiritual quest for most of us in Hindu Spiritual explorations...

    Thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  6. Wow! Thank you all so much for visiting! I'm glad you liked it!

  7. I love the search the delving for the answers.
    Your poem expressed that well.

    wanted to stop by and thank you for stopping by One Shot this week. It is because of poets like you that we have such inspiring words to read. Please feel welcome any Wednesday

    Moon Smiles for the One Stop Team

  8. Relatable, whether man- or woman-read. We're not one thing or another, but many, if we're truly existing/living.

  9. Right! Thanks so much for visiting!