tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8185294956903606403.post7921891647646147366..comments2023-05-17T05:40:33.184-04:00Comments on A Bucket of Poems: In Numbawitchtryinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09626760512365562043noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8185294956903606403.post-18646045629969785472010-10-31T22:06:38.315-04:002010-10-31T22:06:38.315-04:00Yep, it is scary! I'm doing my best to get out...Yep, it is scary! I'm doing my best to get out of the habit of editing in my head. But some poems need months of work, others come out ready to share. <br /><br />Thank you so much!awitchtryinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09626760512365562043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8185294956903606403.post-42840590925689276942010-10-31T02:00:05.059-04:002010-10-31T02:00:05.059-04:00Good on you for having faith and posting without g...Good on you for having faith and posting without giving your internal editor a chance to kick in! It's a bit scary sometimes though, no? <br /><br />Good expression, I felt you feeling it.Michael Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826832031959107724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8185294956903606403.post-27600338037878148342010-10-28T16:13:52.256-04:002010-10-28T16:13:52.256-04:00Wysteria- The words "survival mode" are ...Wysteria- The words "survival mode" are in an <br />Alanis Morissette song. I guess I've been pondering them for a while. Try the singing loudly! I have found it the best way to literally expel a too-big emotion from my body. I only live with my daughter so if she throws shoes, I will send her to her room ;)<br /><br />hedgewitch- Thanks so much! I wrote this in the morning and posted it on my lunch break. I usually wrestle with things for months before I like them. I guess there are all sorts of ways to write, even in one person. <br /><br />Thank you both for visiting!awitchtryinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09626760512365562043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8185294956903606403.post-92103477431274305062010-10-28T06:20:43.814-04:002010-10-28T06:20:43.814-04:00Excellent imagery. Living between breaths...the sm...Excellent imagery. Living between breaths...the small reprieve. You're getting at some difficult concepts and drawing the reader to a resolution along with your own, which is often difficult. <br /><br />Very consistent and well constructed poem, and thanks for your comments on my own work at Verse Escape.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8185294956903606403.post-76244429822246700102010-10-27T16:44:48.022-04:002010-10-27T16:44:48.022-04:00Oh it is so true... Operating in Survival mode! I...Oh it is so true... Operating in Survival mode! I never could put a name to it, but you have!<br /><br />Great poem, and some funny things to keep you up. I will try the singing loudly part, though, I am afraid that I will have shoes thrown at me!<br /><br />WysteriaWysteriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249516708737350017noreply@blogger.com